In some countries, most people prefer to rent their homes rather than buying them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a home?

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
There is a trend towards renting home rather than buying them. Living is a basic necessity of human needs. So standardized living is the top priority of every man. There are some benefits and drawbacks of renting a home, which will be discussed in the essay. People are involved in multitasks to earn money. For the purpose of business
,
Accept space
,
many landlords used to rent out their homes to tenants. There are some benefits of doing it,
firstly
Linking Words
it is a monthly source of income.
Linking Words
Secondly everyone
Accept comma addition
Secondly, everyone
is in dire need of it. So it is a profitable job/business
.
Accept space
.
Thirdly
Linking Words
, those who settled abroad
instead
Linking Words
of leaving their property unattended, they prefer to hand over to safe hands. Through contract, that person is accountable for it.
However
Linking Words
, there are few disadvantages to rent a house.
Firstly
Linking Words
, no one can assess anyone while giving its assets to others either he is a criminal or
honest person
Suggestion
an honest person
.
In addition
Linking Words
, many of them don’t care properly about the home
,
Accept space
,
this
Linking Words
leads to damaging rooms and other parts of it.
For instance
Linking Words
, due to the carelessness, it can cause huge damage or violation. To conclude, if someone has made it for
purpose
Suggestion
the purpose
of business
,
Accept space
,
they should have a
continous
continuing in time or space without interruption
continuous
check on it. It’s a better choice for some people who cannot afford to buy their own houses and it is the most convenient way of living for them.
Submitted by umara_khurram on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.

Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.

When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.

Linking words for giving examples:

  • for example
  • for instance
  • to illustrate this
  • to give a clear example
  • such as
  • namely
  • to illustrate
  • take, for example

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • financial commitment
  • down payment
  • initial costs
  • allocate resources
  • maintenance costs
  • mobility
  • relocate
  • market fluctuations
  • property value
  • building equity
  • appreciate in value
  • asset
  • personalization
  • restrictions
  • rental increases
  • lease renewal
  • financial instability
  • housing budgets
  • long-term security
  • landlord
  • lease agreement
  • equity
  • substantial
  • property ownership
  • property market
What to do next:
Look at other essays: