Many people work from homeusing modern technology today. Some people think that only the workers benefit from this not the employers. Do you agree or disagree?

In
this
globalized world, technology has changed the complete scenario of the
wrokers
a person who works at a specific occupation
workers
in
company
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the company
a company
, in
this
21st century, Information
technology
the practical application of science to commerce or industry
Technology
has
shoke
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shaken
shook
shocked
shock
the world with its growing opportunities to public and most of the workers around the world
work
for IT companies, to make workers more
comfartable
providing or experiencing physical well-being or relief
comfortable
the companies have introduced
new method
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a new method
new methods
that, workers can
work
from
home
with their gadgets
instead
of going to
office
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the office
,
Althogh
even though, in spite of the fact that
although
,
this
method has made a clash between workers and
employes
a person or firm that employs workers
employers
.
To begin
,
work
from
home
is a benefit to workers in most of the cases, like, he can save the traveling time and utilize it in
work
, instaed of spending time in traffic,
this
will reduce the traffic congetion in city and worker can
work
from any location which is
comfartable
for him even from remote places, In all the cases worker is benefited through
this
, well, some people say that employes are not benefitted throgh
this
, has i have seen my brother working in WIPRO, which is a IT company, through the companies website all employers and workers come to geather and
work
, their is no extra benefit for any of them, a manager will be guiding them while working hours, so that, no one can cheat the
work
. To continue,
their
in or at that place
there
is a special website by company for workers and
employes
a worker who is hired to perform a job
employees
employers
who
work
from
home
, and a manager who leads the team to look at
wheather
introduces two alternatives
whether
weather
water
everyone in
team
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the team
a team
are online while working hours or not,
this
is
serious
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a serious work issue
work
issue to grow in their
carrer
the particular occupation for which you are trained
career
careers
, no one can get extra benefit, it is all about their individual performance to showcase, through my experience
were
In or at or to what place
where
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
have seen my brother working from
home
,
Accept space
,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
understood that,
its
it is
it's
comfartable
providing or experiencing physical well-being or relief
comfortable
for
empoyes
a worker who is hired to perform a job
employees
and workers without any partiality. To summarize,
work
from
home
is a good
oppurtunity
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunity
opportunities
for
employes
a person or firm that employs workers
employers
and workers to save time and enjoy working in their
comfartable
providing or experiencing physical well-being or relief
comfortable
places staying with
thier
of them or themselves
their
parents, both of them
are equally benefitted
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equally benefit
of
this
method, I will disagree with the statement that only workers are
benefitted
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benefiting
of
it
it is
it's
not the
employes
a worker who is hired to perform a job
employees
employers
employee
,
judgeing
the cognitive process of reaching a decision or drawing conclusions
judging
it by my brother's
work
.

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