1. You successfully passed a job interview. You are expected to start on November 15, but you will not be available on that date. Write a letter to your new boss. In your letter  explain your situation  express your concern  suggest a solution Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ………………….. ,

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am Reagan Dooley and by

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week I was offered an appointment letter, which mentioned my date of joining as November 15. I am writing because, unfortunately, I will not be able to present myself on that date. I am suffering from viral fever for the past

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week and I am hospitalized for the same reason.

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, the doctor had advised me to take complete rest for the

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two weeks.

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, I will not be able to work until November 20 and I could

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submit a copy of

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required at the time of joining, which will be by November 21. Please excuse me for the delay in joining. Most importantly, I assure to complete my onboarding procedures as to complete as soon as possible,

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I will be able to support the project activities as per the schedule. I sincerely apologies for the

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and I hope

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will not affect our relationship. Thank you Yours faithfully, Reagan Dooley.

Wed Feb 12 2020

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 7.0

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9 paragraphs

170 words

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grateful for the opportunity
unforeseen circumstances
commitments
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