It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

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It is crucial to raise a child into a good individual in the society. It is common believe that employing a

punishment

is the best way to establish a good behaviour and maintaining discipline in children. I completely agree with

this

idea. Parents while punishing must be careful as excess or wrong penalty will lead to negative impact on child’s personality or mental and physical health. They should avoid scolding and smacking children. Many people suggest it is enough to establish a behaviour in a child to distinguish between right and wrong, whereas kids are not enough mature to understand

this

distinction and they make mistakes intentionally or sometimes unintentionally. If they do not get any feedback they tend to make

same mistakes

Suggestion

the same mistakes

time. Penalizing will make them avoid the same mistake again and whenever any bad intentions come to their mind, their body will reflexively remind them of past response for similar action.

For instance

, if a kid makes a drawing on the wall asking them to clean the wall as a little recompense will make them realize

this

is not the right place to draw.

Therefore

punishment

will be a part of teaching children to be better. Now the question is what kinds of

punishment

is useful or acceptable and whether it should be in

form

Suggestion

the form

of physical or verbal? Researchers believe these both must be a very

last

option for

any

quantifier; used with either mass nouns or plural count nouns to indicate an unspecified number or quantity

some

parents to opt. A study published by Institute of clinical psychology, University of Karachi state that wrong and excess retribution

make

Suggestion

makes

a negative impression on

kid’s mind

Suggestion

a kid’s mind

which leads to mental distress and suppression of positive attributes in

child

Suggestion

children

the child

a child

. Referring the above example of wall drawing if the kid was scolded or smacked, chances are he might take drawing as a wrong act and stop drawing. For

this

reason, parents must act wisely in opting response to teach them a positive lesson. To sum up

punishment

is an essential part of upbringing of youngsters it will improve the discipline and help them to distinguish between right and wrong provided that parents applied it sensibly and judiciously.

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punishment
positive reinforcement
consequences
time-outs
removal of privileges
open communication
clear expectations
consistency
fairness
disciplinary action
proportionate
moral values
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