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Some employers offer their employees subsidised membership of gyms and sports clubs,believing that this will make their staff healthier and thus more effective at work.Other employers see no benefit doing so.

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Employers provide paid activities for their employees
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hoping that it increases
capacity
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the capacity
 of personal and motivates them.In case
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there are both points will be discussed.
Firstly
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it
can be seem
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can seem
 that worker's performance indeed might be refreshed
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if some activities will be provided them.
For instance
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employee
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the employee
an employee
employees
 will receive subsidized membership and turn it
advantage
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advantageous
 for them.
Then
 employees will appreciate it and that
give
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gives
 positive reasons for working hard.According to experience
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it could given task more efficiently and raised incentives if employer perform. Other hand
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if employees do not want to spend their spare
time on ongoing
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time on an ongoing
 training and outdoor activities for them, mostly it will cause negative results overall performance of workers.
For example
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It can be noticed some sort of
protests
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protest
 organized by unhappy workers.In that case
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it is revealed task for
company
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companies
a company
 that organize activities for their co-workers. In conclusion
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it can be more
valuable
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valuable, thus
thus
 organizing ongoing training for increase performance review of employees.Spending output on ongoing training would be
more effectively
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more effective
 to motivate workers.

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