Some people say that living in a high-rise apartment block is a lonely experience because there is no community spirit. Others say that people who live in high-rise apartments have a much better sense of community than those live in houses. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
The shortage of land and increasing urbanization, many high-rise buildings are being constructed.
Although
some citizens believe that staying in skyscraper apartments has limit
interaction due to less communication with other people while others think Suggestion
limited
this
lifestyle have much greater socialization rather than living in houses. This
essay will discuss both sides of living in a high-rise apartments
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apartment
block
.
To begin
, high-rise building has its disadvantages. People who live in apartments have no sense of community. For instance
, the dweller is
busy with their own business since their working time exceeding twelve hours a day. Suggestion
has been
This
circumstances
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circumstance
create
the residents more selfish and ignore the surroundings. They do not have a chance to communicate with their Suggestion
creates
neighbors
while those who live in a person who lives (or is located) near another
neighbours
houses
occupant do that. Tower Suggestion
the house's
house's
house
block
residents do not even know who their neighbors
are.
a person who lives (or is located) near another
neighbours
However
, living in the block
of flats have
many advantages. Suggestion
has
Firstly
, people who live in high-rise buildings have a sense of happiness. Thanks to public facilities such
as garden, swimming pool and function rooms; people can go to the garden to relax and it
it is
it's
also
a good chance for them to get acquaintance
with apartment dweller. Suggestion
acquainted
Secondly
, apartment inhabitant can be sociable. Because tower blocks consist of many rooms which are filled with occupants who come from diverse culture. For everyone who is keen on making communication with strange denizen
, Suggestion
Denizen
this
occasion can increase the knowledge about the traditional custom and behavior
of the manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
neighbor
by arranging a meeting and cooking together in the weekend, a person who lives (or is located) near another
neighbour
neighbours
for example
. Automatically, the relationship among the dwellers can be built easily and there is no one who becomes lonely.
In conclusion, living in a high-rise apartment block
can be a lonely experience. However
, it depends on the type of people who live in them. In my opinion, high-rise living is just rewarding socially as living in a house occupant
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occupied
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