Recently more and more people use the internet to buy goods .What do you think are the advantages and disdvantages of this phenomenon.

In past few decades
advancement
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advancements
in the information technology made a drastic change in our day
today
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to day
life. Everyone of us
is having
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has
a gadget in our hand with
verity
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a verity
of applications in it. Shopping applications among these are the most
populer
regarded with great favor, approval, or affection especially by the general public
popular
one
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one, hence
hence
, the trend of buying goods online is very common. In following
paragrpah
one of several distinct subdivisions of a text intended to separate ideas; the beginning is usually marked by a new indented line
paragraph
,
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,
I will discuss the merits and demerits with
relavant
having a bearing on or connection with the subject at issue
relevant
exampls
an item of information that is typical of a class or group
examples
example
of the same. It is very convenient for us to buy the necessary products online rather than buying it from the store.
firstly we
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Firstly, we
Firstly we
do not need to go anywhere for shopping
hence
, it
save
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saves
our time.
secondly
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Secondly
,
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,
we can get
large number
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a large number
of
variety
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varieties
in
every thing
all things
everything
since, in online we can
seee
perceive by sight or have the power to perceive by sight
see
the items from entire world rather than just one
perticular
unique or specific to a person or thing or category
particular
shop. We can
also
get an option to compare the products in terms of price, quality
,
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,
design with other similar products offered by different brands.
Also
,
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,
we can check the
reviewed given
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reviewed, given
by other buyers about it.
In contrast
, buying products online has several
drabacks
the quality of being a hindrance
drawbacks
. We can't touch
,
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,
feel the actual product which we are going to buy.
we
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We
can't try it out
before buying which
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before buying, which
is possible when we buy it from the shop. We don't get the product immediately when we purchase it where as we can take it with us when we buy it from the shop. To sum up, buying goods online is
good but
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good, but
not always.
some time
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Sometime
Some time
it is good to do shopping in store.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • e-commerce
  • convenience
  • accessibility
  • variety
  • price comparison
  • fraud
  • data breaches
  • local businesses
  • delivery issues
  • return and refund policies
  • consumer satisfaction
  • online retailers
  • physical inspection
  • hassle-free
  • shipping
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