Recently more and more people use the internet to buy goods .What do you think are the advantages and disdvantages of this phenomenon.

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In past few decades

advancement

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advancements

in the information technology made a drastic change in our day

today

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to day

life. Everyone of us

is having

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has

a gadget in our hand with

verity

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a verity

of applications in it. Shopping applications among these are the most

populer

regarded with great favor, approval, or affection especially by the general public

popular

one

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one, hence

hence

, the trend of buying goods online is very common. In following

paragrpah

one of several distinct subdivisions of a text intended to separate ideas; the beginning is usually marked by a new indented line

paragraph

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I will discuss the merits and demerits with

relavant

having a bearing on or connection with the subject at issue

relevant

exampls

an item of information that is typical of a class or group

examples

example

of the same. It is very convenient for us to buy the necessary products online rather than buying it from the store.

firstly we

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Firstly, we

Firstly we

do not need to go anywhere for shopping

hence

, it

save

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saves

our time.

secondly

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Secondly

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we can get

large number

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a large number

variety

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varieties

every thing

all things

everything

since, in online we can

seee

perceive by sight or have the power to perceive by sight

see

the items from entire world rather than just one

perticular

unique or specific to a person or thing or category

particular

shop. We can

also

get an option to compare the products in terms of price, quality

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design with other similar products offered by different brands.

Also

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we can check the

reviewed given

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reviewed, given

by other buyers about it.

In contrast

, buying products online has several

drabacks

the quality of being a hindrance

drawbacks

. We can't touch

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feel the actual product which we are going to buy.

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can't try it out

before buying which

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before buying, which

is possible when we buy it from the shop. We don't get the product immediately when we purchase it where as we can take it with us when we buy it from the shop. To sum up, buying goods online is

good but

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good, but

not always.

some time

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Sometime

Some time

it is good to do shopping in store.

Thu Feb 13 2020

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consumer satisfaction
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Recently more and more people use the internet to buy goods .What do you think are the advantages and disdvantages of this phenomenon.

Fully explain your ideas

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