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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Percentage of UK people who consumed daily recommended amount of fruit and vegetable in 2002, 2006 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

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The
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 reflects the recommended daily
consumption
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 of
a
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mount
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the amount
of fruits and vegetables in 2002, 2006 and 2010 of the people of the UK. Three bars in each
year
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 represent men, women and children. As seen in the
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, women lead from the front with the highest
consumption
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 every
year
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, followed by men and children were the least. 2006 was the
year
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 when the fruits and vegetables were eaten the most, whereas in 2002 it was the lowest. In the same
year
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, the highest
amount
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 was consumed by women with 25%, while
consumption
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 by men was slightly less with just 3% and 11% b
y
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of
children. The stats sharply increased in 2006, with women being at the top again with 32%,
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ear 26%
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year, 26
 percent of the men consumed the daily recommended
amount
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 of fruits and vegetables and children w
ith
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by
18%.
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, in the
last
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year
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 people consumed it a little less as there’s a decline in the
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. Though,
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year
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 as well the visual representation of the
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 remains the same with women at
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, closely followed by men and children. To summarize, it is observed that, daily recommended
amount
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 of fruits and vegetable is mainly consumed by women every
year
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 than by men and children.
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, 2006 was the
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 with maximum
consumption
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 of it.
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