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Many university graduates cannot find a job in their chosen profession what factors may have caused this situation and what in your opinion,should be done about it.

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When young people finished their studies, they eager to find a work in their chosen career.But in
this
 new era of generation the new graduates are hard to find a
job
.In
this
eassy
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issue
 I will discuss my opinion, that the youngsters who is newly
finish
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finished
 their studies are not easy to find a
job
.Because of the high
demand
 of the
company
 and higher
demand
 of
experience
. To commence with
,
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,
The high
demand
 of
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
 employer to the new graduates are the most huge
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state of uncertainty or perplexity especially as requiring a choice between equally unfavorable options
dilemma
 nowadays. As the result
,
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,
many young people who
is
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are
 new graduates now are not easy to find work.For an instance
,
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,
the Engineer
,
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,
IT
,
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,
and Law
this
 is higher
demand
 now of our society
,
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,
that the new graduates are difficult to find a good
job
 in
company
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the company
a company
.
Moreover
, The
company
 they are essential to understand the situation of new graduates in all
university
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universities
.
A part
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Apart
from from
a giver or sender
from
this
,
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,
The higher
experience
also
 of the
company
 is the huge problem of the youngsters.
when
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When
 they are new finished to choose their Fields in their institute, because of
this
 issue some students that newly graduates are stress and feel more tension
,
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,
when they are
want
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wanting
 to apply a
job
.
For example
, today the famous
company
are not hired
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is not hiring
is not hired
doesn't hire
does not hire
 a worker, if the new graduates are not smart and intelligent.
Nevertheless
,
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,
the
company
 they are necessary to understand, the capacity about the
experience
 of young people in
this
 new era. In Conclusion
,
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,
the young people
are they
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are, they
 are
need
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needing
needed
 to find a
job
 in their chosen profession so that they enhance their skills or knowledge.So that in the future they share their
experience
 about of their
job
.
in
Suggestion
In
 my opinion, they should understand the situation of new graduates young people in their chosen career so that they can be a good leader or model in future.

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