Some people believe that the increasing number of vehicles is one of the biggest problem facing cities, while others believe that cities have bigger challenges. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

In the growing world cities are getting polluted and messed up, either by increasing number of vehicles or decrease in the

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and a large group of people thinks that one of the main challenges is rising in the count of vehicles, whereas few believe that, except

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there are many serious problems. I partially agree with both the opinions and I would like to discuss both the views in following paragraphs. An increment in the proportion of motor vehicles is enhancing the level of the pollution in the cities. Generally, most of the transport goods are based on the fuel engine, which directly affects the environment because it emits the dangerous molecules, which can result in the health problems.

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, DELHI, which is the capital of India is most polluted city in the world just because of the availability of automobiles in huge figure.

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, as we all know that the growth in impurity of air quality is a global concern and we can't deny the fact that the main reason behind

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, is the hike in the percentage of the motor-vehicles. Certainly, there are more challenges cities are suffering with and one of them is lack of the agricultural

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. As people are dying on the daily basis

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because they are not getting the

required food to

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food required to

suffer. As companies are establishing their factories in the main capitals and utilising the reproductive lands for their needs

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directly result in the loss of rural areas and if, village area would be destroyed

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, it may cause more dangerous complications.

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, AFRICA is suffering with the starvation because most of

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has been acquired by multinational companies and they do not have enough ground space to grow more food.

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, advancement of the modern era is hitting the starvation as well as

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of or relating to the cultivation of plants

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lands. In conclusion,

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think that there are many challenges which should be

concern

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concerned

because things

can not

can not

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be only done by decreasing the vehicles proportion and prohibiting the corporate sector to make use of

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. In my opinion, where big business sectors will improve

employement rate

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the employment rate

employment rate

unemployment rate

as well as, automobiles

makes

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make

our life easy and flexible.