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Universities should enrol equal members of male and female students in all subjects. Do you agree or disagree?

#universities #enrol #members #students #subjects
Education is
a
expresses position, direction or location, or point in time
at
 the
bed rock
solid unweathered rock lying beneath surface deposits of soil
bedrock
 of every nation. Irrespective of age or gender education is important to everyone. Higher education is
also
 very fundamental, tertiary institutions can enrol as many
student
Suggestion
students
 as they can educate. The sex of the students they are enrolling in any of their subjects should not be an issue. In any society, it can be gathered from statistics that male and female are never the same in
number
. There
is
Suggestion
have been
 always a higher
number
 of males or females, it's never the same in
number
. It is almost impossible for anyone to insist on equal
number
 of both sexes in any particular subject in the university. In my opinion, education in any particular subject should be left for individuals to decide and not be imposed on anyone. Insisting on having equal
number
 of both sexes in any course
in
Suggestion
at
 a tertiary institution is preposterous and gender biased.
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