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Living in a country, where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

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Moving overseas for higher-education or looking for greener pastures is the major trend, these days.Individuals taking active participation in these has to deal with foreign language regularly. Some people think that
this
 can result in some social and practical problems. I completely agree with aforementioned statement and will discuss same in detail in below mentioned paragraphs. To initiate with, dealing with a foreign accent in a foreign country causes enormous obstacles on the way of performing regular activities and achieving the growth. It troubles a many to understand the core meaning of the content and results in a negative impact on performance. For an example, it was found in a study in England that non-native students were below average in achieving results, than the native students.
In addition
 to that, one has to deal with the culture shock, not only, making that reluctant to celebrate festivals to its heart,
also
 makes troubles in social dealings and meetings with various people.
Besides
, these problems there are several benefits of same.
Firstly
, individuals get a chance to understand and learn a new language which results in better opportunities at work place.
Secondly
, using a foreign language widens the horizon of the people and helps establish them as a better person.For an illustration, by embracing
a
Suggestion
an
 overseas vocabulary in its true sense and adapting same in regular life makes it easier to establish as a good work force. But, as learning and speaking a strange terminology is a matter of time, it still has a negative impact at the very initial stage. In conclusion, irrespective of the troubles caused by speaking
an
Suggestion
a
alige
a human limb; commonly used to refer to a whole limb but technically only the part of the limb between the knee and ankle
leg
 style, individuals cannot refrain from same. There is always some sacrifice to get some benefit, as
such
, an attempt should be there to have a grip on same as soon as possible.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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