Write about the following topic. information technology enables many people to do their work outside their workplace (e.g. at home, when travelling. etc.). Do the benefits of this mobility outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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social

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Social

media has become an integral part of human life

Accept space

and we

becoming

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are becoming

become

dependent on it. Many people believe that

internet

help to do their work at outside of their workplace.

while

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While

other

plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned

others

feel that mobility have some bad impact on our society. I agree with the

formar

referring to the first of two things or persons mentioned (or the earlier one or ones of several)

former

format

statement

refers to the speaker or writer

believe that social media have so many beneficial side those are outweigh the drawback of technology.

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is generally thought that social media bring a great revolution in our connectivity. The connectivity experience today is unimaginable. The world has become a smaller place with social media.

social

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Social

media is a platform that has empowered people to showcase talent. All over the

world people

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world, people

can work their official assignment at home.

For example

, when people stay at home or

traveling

the act of going from one place to another

travelling

they can do their job by

internet

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The internet

make

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makes

their life beneficial and productive.

many

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Many

people use

internet

for their presentation. Using

internet

save

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saves

their time and money.

social

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Social

media have so many disadvantages

fastly

with rapid movements

quickly

vastly

over use of

internet

established communication gap. Many parents have no enough time to spend with their children.

because

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Because

of their work at home.It has an undesirable effect on their children and some people miss

communicate

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communicating

with their colleagues. Clearly there are some negative expect to

internet

and social media or technology. If it is used sensibly and people take

regular break

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regular breaks

a regular break

from their computer.

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There

are

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only benefit that

remain

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remains

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

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230 words

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Some people believe teenagers should focus on all subjects equally, whereas other people think that they should concentrate on only those subjects that they find interesting.

In their advertising, business nowadays usually emphasise that their productss are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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: It is important to spend public money on promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend on treatment of people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree or disagree?