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Some people believe that it is essential to include Physical Education classes in the curriculum for all school-age children. Others think that children's time is better spent on more academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, physical
education
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 as a
subject
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has became
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has become
 a critical question in the society. Some people argue that Physical
Education
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 should be included into
time tabel
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the time table
time table
a time table
time travel
 as
a
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an
esential
absolutely necessary; vitally necessary
essential
subject
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. While that others believe that
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student
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students
the student
a student
 should pay
attention
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 on academic subjects. In my opinion, I believe that every
student
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 should have
opportunity
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the opportunity
an opportunity
 to learn Physical
Education
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 and
also
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 it is important to pay
attention
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 on other subjects. Some individuals have strongly believed that all
school
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childern
a young person of either sex
children
 should learn Physical
Education
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 as a
subject
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 in their
school
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 curriculum. Being healthy is very important as a human, for that
sports
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sport
 and exercises play a major role
.
Accept space
.
 Recently, we can see lots of students are experiencing
illneses
impairment of normal physiological function affecting part or all of an organism
illnesses
illness
 like over fat,
daibetic
someone who has diabetes
diabetic
,
colestrol
an animal sterol that is normally synthesized by the liver; the most abundant steroid in animal tissues
cholesterol
 because of lack of
konwledge
the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning
knowledge
 regarding healthy foods, live styles, Most of countries have included Health and Physical
Education
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 as a
subject
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 in their
education
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 system.
For example
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, we
had ten minitues
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had a ten minute
had ten minute
had ten minutes
 exercise session before
strating
a turn to be a starter (in a game at the beginning)
starting
 the
school
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 when I was
a
expresses position, direction or location, or point in time
at
school
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. It can be understood, Physical
Education
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 is playing a major role as a
subject
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 in
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school curriculum
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the school curriculum
 for each an every
student
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redardless
in spite of everything; without regard to drawbacks
regardless
 their age. On
other hand
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the other hand
, some part of people argue that it is good to pay more
attention
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 on academic subjects like Science, Statistis, Biology etc. Fast
increasement
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 of population and demand for the job opportunities are created
a
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an
unnessesory
not necessary
unnecessary
unnecessarily
compertiton
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 in
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education system
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the education system
 because of
that most
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that, most
 of
parents
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the parents
 are tending to pay more
attention
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 regarding
school
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 curriculum before than
past
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the past
. To win
this
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compertition
a business relation in which two parties compete to gain customers
competition
, students have to
sellect
pick out, select, or choose from a number of alternatives
select
selected
 academic subjects to get more points.
For instance
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, when I was at
school
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 my mother was not happy about my sports related activities
.
Accept space
.
 Most of time she
advice
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advised
 me to pay
attention
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 on
education
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. It is clear that how academic subjects important to our life. Recently, Physical
Education
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is became
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has become
a
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an
agurmental
relating to or being an element
elemental
discution
an extended communication (often interactive) dealing with some particular topic
discussion
discussions
 in
soiety
an extended social group having a distinctive cultural and economic organization
society
city
 as a
subject
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 in
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school timetable
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the school timetable
. Some individuals are arguing that it is
vital
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a vital subject
subject
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to
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for
 every
student
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 while others say
student
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 should pay more
attention
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 on academic subjects. Depend upon
above facts
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the above facts
, I believe that Physical
Education
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 is
very important
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a very important subject
subject
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 for every
students
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student
. Healthy
student
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are
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is
 the fundamental factor of any society.

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