The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pictures illustrate of design of
wave-energy
Add an article
the wave-energy
machine
and where it is located.
Use synonyms
Firstly
, a Linking Words
waves
Change the noun form
wave
movement
Change preposition
of movement
coming
to the Wrong verb form
comes
machine
and fills up inside it. After Use synonyms
water
levels Correct article usage
the water
rises
up to the top of Change the verb form
rise
Correct article usage
the chamber
chamber
lower Change noun form
chamber's
side
, Use synonyms
then
it will Linking Words
produced
Change the verb form
produce
an
air. The air flows from under Correct article usage
apply
Use synonyms
side
of Correct article usage
the side
chambers
and rotates the lower turbine. For Correct article usage
the chambers
upper
turbine, it is rotated by the air that comes in from Correct article usage
the upper
above
Correct article usage
the above
chamber
Correct article usage
the chamber
side
. Use synonyms
Next
, after Linking Words
all
turbines rotate, it will Add a comma
,all
Change the verb form
result
resulted
energy which Add the preposition
inresulted
fromresulted
convert
to become electricity Change the verb form
converts
power
inside Use synonyms
in
electricity generator.
Correct your spelling
an
Furthermore
, the location of Linking Words
wave-energy
Add an article
the wave-energy
machine
is determined by Use synonyms
waves
Change the noun form
wave
power
that Use synonyms
coming
inside to lower Wrong verb form
comes
side
of Use synonyms
chamber
. If Add an article
the chamber
further
the Linking Words
machine
Use synonyms
located
from the coastline, Add a missing verb
is located
then
more Linking Words
power
Use synonyms
produced
Add a missing verb
is produced
as well
Linking Words
as
Correct your spelling
a
higher
cost Correct article usage
a higher
needed
to construct the Add a missing verb
is needed
machine
. Use synonyms
Otherwise
, ifLinking Words
nearer
the Change preposition
apply
machine
Use synonyms
located
Add a missing verb
is located
from
the coastline, that will make Change preposition
near
cheaper
to build even though electricity Correct pronoun usage
it cheaper
power
would Use synonyms
smaller
to produce.Add a missing verb
be smaller
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words machine, side, power with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "waves" was used 2 times.
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