The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pictures illustrate of design of
wave-energy
Add an article
the wave-energy
machine
and where it is located.
Firstly
, a waves
Change the noun form
wave
movement
Change preposition
of movement
coming
to the Wrong verb form
comes
machine
and fills up inside it. After water
levels Correct article usage
the water
rises
up to the top of Change the verb form
rise
Correct article usage
the chamber
chamber
lower Change noun form
chamber's
side
, then
it will produced
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produce
an
air. The air flows from under Correct article usage
apply
side
of Correct article usage
the side
chambers
and rotates the lower turbine. For Correct article usage
the chambers
upper
turbine, it is rotated by the air that comes in from Correct article usage
the upper
above
Correct article usage
the above
chamber
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the chamber
side
. Next
, after all
turbines rotate, it will Add a comma
,all
Change the verb form
result
resulted
energy which Add the preposition
inresulted
fromresulted
convert
to become electricity Change the verb form
converts
power
inside in
electricity generator.
Correct your spelling
an
Furthermore
, the location of wave-energy
Add an article
the wave-energy
machine
is determined by waves
Change the noun form
wave
power
that coming
inside to lower Wrong verb form
comes
side
of chamber
. If Add an article
the chamber
further
the machine
located
from the coastline, Add a missing verb
is located
then
more power
produced
Add a missing verb
is produced
as well
as
Correct your spelling
a
higher
cost Correct article usage
a higher
needed
to construct the Add a missing verb
is needed
machine
. Otherwise
, if nearer
the Change preposition
apply
machine
located
Add a missing verb
is located
from
the coastline, that will make Change preposition
near
cheaper
to build even though electricity Correct pronoun usage
it cheaper
power
would smaller
to produce.Add a missing verb
be smaller
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words machine, side, power with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "waves" was used 2 times.
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