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You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter 1. describe the problem with the equipment 2. explain how this problem is affecting your work 3. say what you want the shop or company to do

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Dear Sir/ Madam Today I write
this
leter
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 you to report
about
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a problem with the computer that I bought at your shop.
Last
 week, I bought a computer at your store and just a day after, there was a problem with it. When I was doing research for my computer's new project, it suddenly shut down. I tried many ways to turn it on again but there was nothing happened.
As a result
, I could not complete my work on time. I hope that you will
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 technicians to come to my home and solve
this
 problem for me as soon as possible. Yours sincerely

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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