Write about the following topic: In many countries it is now illegal to smoke in public places. It is only fair that people who wish to smoke should have to leave the building. Do you agree or disagree? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Recently, most nations have banned smoking in public areas.

Although

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smoking

is harmful to health and smokers are

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is harmful to health and smokers

has harmful to health and smokers been

is harmful to health and smokers being

is harmful to health and smokers are

liable to die young, it is still their right to express themselves. In my opinion,

i

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I

think it is fair to put up laws restricting smokers on where they can

smoke

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rather than

ouright ban

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an outright ban

outright ban

outright bans

right ban

.

Firstly

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, cigarettes

is

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are

beneficial to health. It contains

nicotine which

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nicotine, which

is said to have significant relaxing effects. Studies have shown that

individuals depressed

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individuals, depressed

or stressed feel more

relaxaed

without strain or anxiety

relaxed

after one or two sticks of cigarette.

Secondly

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, smoking enhances an individual's understanding and assimilation during studying. A comparative study conducted among a group of university students who

smoke

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before reading and those who do not

smoke

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before studying showed an improved performance among the students that

smoke

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.

On the contrary

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, the restriction will protect

non smokers

a person who does not smoke tobacco

nonsmokers

from the hazards of smoking. It is said that non smokers smokes twice while inhaling the puffs of a smoker and the effects on health is more. The effects

is

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are

even more on

immunocompromised

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individuals. Studies have shown that non smokers that stay with smokers are two times more at risk of respiratory diseases. In conclusion,

i

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I

do believe that cigarette smoking is not an illegal substance and restricting individuals to clearly identified smoking areas

by

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of

law is a better way to protect

non smokers

a person who does not smoke tobacco

nonsmokers

from the

harzards

a source of danger; a possibility of incurring loss or misfortune

hazards

of smoking.