Some people believe that schools should only teach children subjects which are beneficial to their future career and therefore other subjects such as music and sports are not important. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In

most

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most educational

education

systems nowadays, academic

disciplines bringing

Accept comma addition

disciplines, bringing

about

merits

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the merits

for students' careers are being prioritized over some other subjects

such

as music and sports.

Although

such

viewpoint does have some benefits, I believe putting other subjects to

unnecessity

the condition of being essential or indispensable

necessity

should be rejected for the comprehensive development of adolescences. There are some reasons for advocates to encourage

education

practitioners to teach core subjects.

Firstly

, these are fundamental disciplines for children to learn and practise cognitive skills, logical thinking and problem solving, which facilitate them

to well respond to

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to respond well to

the swiftly changing environment.

Secondly

, while technology development enhances the living standard throughout the world, it leads to an increase in unprecedented requirements in the

labor

a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages

labour

force, resulting in pressure for

education

planners to build their curriculums focusing on subjects that train students to meet the recruiters' expectations, as well as perform well in workplaces.

On the other hand

, it is crucial to keep teaching music and sports and other peripheral subjects, because the prime purpose of

education

is promoting an ideal environment for a child to develop intellectual abilities and physical health equally. It is tedious for students to become productive personnel as well as coping with manual work in their social lives without being healthy.

Moreover

, students differ from each other in individual abilities and talents,

therefore

too much concentration on several subjects will likely lead to enormous exhaustion of gifted students who perform well in

arts

Suggestion

the arts

and non-academic fields.

Hence

,

this

situation may decline the educational output in general. In conclusion, apart from intellectual subjects, teachers and

education

executors should not reject the advantages of other subjects to their students' comprehensive development.

Education

practitioners are ought to put more effort into exploiting the merits of all subjects for the developed

education

system.