International tourism has brought enormous benefits to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Tourism
has
an
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a
greater impact on
countries'
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the countries' economy
economy
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. Travelling to other places on vacation always helps to increase the financial state of travelling nation, even though always
their
in or at that place
there
is
an
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a
worry on residents and their
teritory
a region marked off for administrative or other purposes
territory
because of the increasing travellers to their habitat.
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vocational visitor to the countries
always stablize
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always stabilizes
always stabilize
or
elivate
provide physical relief, as from pain
alleviate
the poverty, which always makes
country
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famous regardless of few changes seen in inhabitant population and
geographically
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geography
. In my opinion, tourism
benifits
financial assistance in time of need
benefits
more than than the affect showing on
public
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the public
and their nature will be discussed in the essay. Aboard tourism plays a vital role in
expand
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expanding
the countries'
economy
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. As more visitor coming to a
country
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always increase the popularity as well as generate good revenue for the nation, which can used for nations own growth and perpetuate. Recent articles
has shown
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have shown
that how
dubai's
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Dubai's
economy
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rate has expanded over the period of time because of
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the business of providing services to tourists
tourism
,
also
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on other hand
havard
be undecided about something; waver between conflicting positions or courses of action
hovered
research
studies says
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studies, says
that most of the low level countries has nourished their poverty by attracting
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toursim
the business of providing services to tourists
tourism
. These ultra-challenging invention increase the value and make the
country
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famous over other nations by elevating their
economy
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. On Other hand, every action has
an
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a
dual effect like one for good and another for bad.
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, increasing journeyer will have a minimal
affect
a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
effect
on dwellers and their
culture
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, whereas public
always get
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always gets
attracted towards their body language, dressing and
also
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their fast paced
culture
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. Which always hamper their
trational
consisting of or derived from tradition
traditional
ways
where in
(formal) where, in what respect
wherein
they are used to form longer time.
Recent survey
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A recent survey
shows that, residents like to adapt to new
culture
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like dressing or the way they carry them from voyager, which change their natural way and could change the
culture
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of the native society.
Increased popularity
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The increased popularity
of any nation can be done by means of
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toursim
the business of providing services to tourists
tourism
, which brings a great money. In
this
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essay I have discussed about the benefits of
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toursim
the business of providing services to tourists
tourism
by increasing
econmy
the system of production and distribution and consumption
economy
economies
of a
provinence
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with contrast to changing in the life style of
habitant
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the habitant
and geographically due increasing tourist. I strongly
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
believes
believed
that attracting other nations by tourism always help the
country
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to grow can outweigh the changes in locals could happen because of
they
objective case of they
them
getting admired by dwellers life style, which is completely depends on
indiviual
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the individual
individual
rather than blaming others.
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