The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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Given is a graph that presents average

carbon

dioxide

(CO2) emissions per head in four

countries

from 1967 and 2007.

Overall

, the United Kingdom and Sweden were

educed

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reduced

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the highest number of

carbon

dioxide

per head.

The both

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Both

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countries

decrease, and it continues to decline. The other two

countries

continue to increase.

According to

the graph below,

United

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the United

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Kingdom is the highest among the four

countries

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the emission of

carbon

dioxide

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nearly 11 metric

tonnes

and since 1977, it slowly

decreases

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decreased

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. Sweden

increases

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increased

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until 1977 which

reaches

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reached

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above ten metric

tonnes

, but

then

declines

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declined

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On the other hand

, Portugal and Italy are increasing during the period from 1967 to 2007. Italy is almost four metric

tonnes

per person and Portugal is approximately one metric tonne. By

the

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2007, both

countries

are

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achieved

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nearly eight and 6.5 metric

tonnes

However

Italy

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Italy's

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increased

the

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emission of CO2 is not higher than the United

Kingdom

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Kingdom's

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, which

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was

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almost 8.3 metric

tonnes

in 2007. Sweden the value of

carbon

dioxide

emission

since declined

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, since declined,

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is the same level as Portugal in 2007

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