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The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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Given is a graph that presents average
carbon
dioxide
 (CO2) emissions per head in four
countries
 from 1967 and 2007.
Overall
, the United Kingdom and Sweden were
educed
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reduced
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 the highest number of
carbon
dioxide
 per head.
The both
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Both
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countries
 decrease, and it continues to decline. The other two
countries
 continue to increase.
According to
 the graph below,
United
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the United
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 Kingdom is the highest among the four
countries
by
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in
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 the emission of
carbon
dioxide
,
is
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nearly 11 metric
tonnes
 and since 1977, it slowly
decreases
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decreased
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. Sweden
increases
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increased
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 until 1977 which
reaches
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reached
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to
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above ten metric
tonnes
, but
then
 it
declines
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declined
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.
On the other hand
, Portugal and Italy are increasing during the period from 1967 to 2007. Italy is almost four metric
tonnes
 per person and Portugal is approximately one metric tonne. By
the
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apply
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2007, both
countries
are
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had
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 achieved
to
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apply
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nearly eight and 6.5 metric
tonnes
.
However
,
Italy
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Italy's
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 increased
the
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apply
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emission of CO2 is not higher than the United
Kingdom
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Kingdom's
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, which
is
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was
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 almost 8.3 metric
tonnes
 in 2007. Sweden the value of
carbon
dioxide
 emission
since declined
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, since declined,
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 is the same level as Portugal in 2007
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 86%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words carbon, dioxide, countries, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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