The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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Given is a graph that presents average

carbon

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dioxide

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(CO2) emissions per head in four

countries

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from 1967 and 2007.

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, the United Kingdom and Sweden were

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the highest number of

carbon

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dioxide

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per head.

The both

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countries

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decrease, and it continues to decline. The other two

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continue to increase.

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the graph below,

United

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the United

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Kingdom is the highest among the four

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the emission of

carbon

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dioxide

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nearly 11 metric

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and since 1977, it slowly

decreases

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. Sweden

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until 1977 which

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above ten metric

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declines

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, Portugal and Italy are increasing during the period from 1967 to 2007. Italy is almost four metric

tonnes

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per person and Portugal is approximately one metric tonne. By

the

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2007, both

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are

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achieved

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nearly eight and 6.5 metric

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Italy

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Italy's

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increased

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emission of CO2 is not higher than the United

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, which

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almost 8.3 metric

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in 2007. Sweden the value of

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dioxide

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emission

since declined

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is the same level as Portugal in 2007

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 86%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words carbon, dioxide, countries, tonnes with synonyms.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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183 words

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carbon dioxide emissions
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average emissions
gradual decrease
peak
sharp decline
steady increase
industrial growth
rise in emissions
economic development
industrialization
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downward trend
national responses
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