Carn ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty year that many cities in the world are now “one big traffic jam” How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?

In the past three decades, there has been an evident growth in the number of cars bought and owned by every family.
Therefore
, in a large number of cities around the
globe
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globe's
citizens find commuting to work by car and parking at the office difficult and almost impossible at times. There are some strategies to implement in order to decrease the use of automobiles. The rise in traffic is evident all around the globe. Nowadays, it is less expensive to buy cars and fill the tank with fuel.
Consequently
, many families have even more than one car.
This
situation,
for example
, has become very
frequent especially
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frequent, especially
in Buenos
Aires where
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Aires, where
long distances are needed to be achieved in order to get the children to school or get to work.
This
amount of cars has become unbearable not only in concern to
traffic but
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traffic, but
also
regarding parking which has become impossible downtown. There are some measures that the administration of any city could apply.
For example
, In the Autonomous City of Buenos Aires, there is a new legislation that does not allow regular cars to enter downtown areas during weekdays from 7
a
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
am
.
m
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M
to 7 p.m.
Therefore
, life is much easier not only for
pedestrian but
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pedestrian, but
also
for cyclists.
In addition
, bus tickets have decreased their prices and you can rent a bike and even electric skates for free in many stations around town to go to work or to school and get fit at the same time. In conclusion, even though buying cars
is
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are
pretty accessible these days, we should try to use our cars the less possible, perhaps to travel on holidays or to go on
vacation but
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vacation, but
not on
daily bases
Suggestion
a daily basis
a daily bases
as it is much healthier to ride a bike, walk or take the bus at times when the distances are too long.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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