The chart below gives information about the most common sports played in New Zealand in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart illustrates the most sports played by

boys

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and

girls

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NewZealand

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New Zealand

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in 2002. As

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apply

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can be seen that

netball

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was the most popular sport among

girls

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and they showed very less interest in playing Cricket.

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Soccer was mostly preferred and

Netball

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was less played by

boys

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On the other hand

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, Swimming was popular in both groups.

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, the percentage of

boys

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were

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higher in all sports except Athletics,

Netball

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and swimming. In tennis, Bakestall and Athletics the percentage of males and females were quite close. The chart

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reveals that the proportion of

boys

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in Soccer accounted for almost 24% and

Netball

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was observed the lowest proportion at only 1%. 25% of the

girls

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enjoyed playing

Netball

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and only 1 % participated in cricket. In Swimming, the percentage of

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took

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who took

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part

were

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was

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approximately 23% and 14% were

girls

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Also

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, both

girls

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and

boys

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showed their interest in other sports which accounted

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for 10

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% for

girls

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and around 17% for

boys

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. Athletics which was

least

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last

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played by both

boys

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and

girls

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were 4% and 5% respectively.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words boys, girls, netball with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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3 paragraphs

180 words

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