Today more and more tourists are visiting places where condition are difficult such as Sahara or the Antarctic. Discuss advantage and disadvantage for tourist who visit these places.

These
day
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days
, tourism
become
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becomes
flourishing with increasing of holidaymaker. As they
pursuing
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pursue
are pursuing
for
new
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a new experience
experience
to cure their boredom from their daily
life
. Providing many
favorite
something regarded with special favor or liking
favourite
locations are often occupied with many tourists, some often choose difficulty over the accommodation
such
as some
distance
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distant
land with a number of
condition
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conditions
for valuable
experience
.
For example
Volcano, The North Pole or The Amazon. There are many
advantage
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advantages
and disadvantage
from
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of
visiting
these
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this place
these places
place
First
of all,
uncomforting
travel and hostile environment
will fended
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will fend
off
casual tourist
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the casual tourist
which leave the area intact and pure. As one could
experiencing
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experience
the pure nature in a long vacation is a great way to improve
life
quality. The
place
located in inhabitant area
such
as the Sahara will force them to leave their daily
life
behind which calm the
visitor
.
Likewise
, visiting an uninhabitable location will leave
visitor
to be with themselves. They
therefore
will enter the solitary state which most of the time could give many good
idea
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ideas
, reviewing their
life
and ultimately become
clam
steadiness of mind under stress
calm
and shape their
mind
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minds
like many great
philosopher
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philosophers
such
as Buddha. In the same fashion, untouched nature like these is hardly to visit, If anyone
manage
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manages
to be there, at least it will
gives
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give
them
many
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much
valuable
experience
with some nice story and sometimes a new friend.
Nevertheless
, these
land
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lands
are mostly hostile. There many
case
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cases
had experienced serious injury,
cripple
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the cripple
cripples
and the worst case, death. These are from the hazardous environment
such
as very low or high temperature, poisonous creatures, wild diseases, and a lot more lethal causes. In the same manner, these
area
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areas
are far from cities or civilization. In another word, the
visitor
have to expect low to non-accommodation, poor emergency
respond
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response
responders
and in the worst case there
are
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is
hardly any medical treatment. In the meantime,
visitor
have to absorb
astonishing travel cost
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the astonishing travel cost
from many tangible
need
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needs
such
as
experienced local guide
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an experienced local guide
, a list of many special equipment and insurance. Death is
also
taking an account to visiting
these
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this place
these places
place
. In general, these
place
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places
are beautiful and packed with great
experience
like a rare gem. By
this
I mean, it is a nice
place
for any risk able holidaymaker and we should visit once in a
life
time.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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