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Students should be primarily taught academic subjects so that they can pass exams, and practical skills such as cooking should not be taught. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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The Line graph illustrates the amount of the visitors explored the Malaysia and Dubai between 1995 and 2003. Overall, it is clear that the Dubai was most famous for tourists, while, the
Malaysia
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Malays
 was less attractive rather than Dubai
in
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at
 the end of
period
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the period
. In 1995, the Dubai accounted for around 48 thousand of the visitors, which Slidely reduced in 1996 before dramatically ascended
untill
up to, before the time
until
 1998. The figure was nearly 175,000, and the number of the tourist slowly declined in 1999.
However
, the figure
noticeablly
in a noticeable manner
noticeably
 enhanced at roughly 325,000 tourists in 2001. After that, the number stood the top position
in
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at
 the end of the period, at precisely 400
thousands
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thousand
. Interestingly, there was an equal sum found in 2001 in both Malaysia and Dubai, which was nearly 325000 visitors. In the Malaysia, accurately 100000 visitors noticed in the
begining
the event consisting of the start of something
beginning
 of the period, which irregularly rose until the year of 2001. The account was nearly 325000 people.
Besides
, the visitors amount markedly dropped in 2003, at just below 250000.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • holistic approach
  • integrate
  • practical skills
  • diminish
  • independence
  • incorporating
  • curriculum
  • concrete applications
  • theoretical knowledge
  • engaging
  • relevant
  • dichotomy
  • interdisciplinary approaches
  • underestimate
  • soft skills
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