The position of women has changed a great deal in many societies over the past 50 years. But these societies cannot claim to have achieved gender equality. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Women’s equality

has seen

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saw

a drastic change in

last

five

decade

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decades

,

however

, the communities cannot prove to achieve gender equality. I completely disagree

to

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with

this

statement.

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essay will explain my position with reasons and examples. Undoubtedly, female sex used to face inequality in certain field of work

such

as financial advisor. People used to judge a woman’s intellectual

skills

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skill

in money matters because they believe that women do not have a wisdom in worldly matters.

Nevertheless

, I do believe that

this

has changed and women have achieved an equal position in the world. Out of all the reasons, the foremost one is

number

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the number

of female in schools have grown immensely. Earlier, parents did not send girls to school as they thought that they were

ment

mean or intend to express or convey

meant

to do the household chores. But, presently with the various awareness programs in place, parents have started understanding the importance of education for both the gender. A good example of

this

is, India

have shown

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has shown

a statistical increase of 8% with the campaign “Beti Bachao Beti Padhao”. In

this

program the insightful information for literacy was spread and

hence

the number shows the improvement in the field of education. The

second

reason is women have

embrassed

include in scope; include as part of something broader; have as one's sphere or territory

embraced

the height of success in

majority

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the majority

of the fields.

In other words

,

female

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the female

have started

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has started

working and achieving success in the profiles where

initially

our ancestors could not have thought

off

connects a noun with the preceding word

of

. To illustrate, India has recently recruited a lady officer in

army

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the army

since the army was formed. As

this

field is considered to be full of strategies and physical strength authorities never preferred lady as

an

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a

suitable candidate,

however

,

this

change is visible.

Thus

, to conclude, it can be commented that with

a

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an

increase in

number

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the number

of girls enrolled in schools and with remarkable achievement of women in various fields prove that societies have reached the gender equality state worldwide.