Children nowadays spend a great deal of time watching television. However, television cannot replace the book as a learning tool, which is why children are less well‐educated today. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

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era of technological boom,

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is considered to be

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a good method

the best method

good methods

the better method

of children’s education.

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, While some people feel that media could be the best way of teaching for children, I firmly believe that tangible documents are irreplaceable no matter what

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all the people living at the same time or of approximately the same age

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they belong to It is clear that the benefits of

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as a learning tool are undeniable. The most significant advantage is that it could bring instant knowledge with a great variety of

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around the world. There are more than 100 alternative channels to switch

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from

using just only a

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remotely

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on

a

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connected with national cable.

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, children could watch the whole shows of the IELTS preparation on educational channels after finishing a documentary of wild habitats broadcasted on Geography ones. The

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benefit is that

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showed on

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is displayed in motion which can be helpful for their imagination. While children are considered to be the most imaginative generation, moving activities would put an unforgettable

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memory

in their brains.

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, when mentioning a show which attracts their attention children could give out the complete story and

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on

that show without any

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indecision in speech or action

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, I am convinced that

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the book

will be much more conductive to other people in term of learning tool for children.

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, while watching

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could create

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a distraction

by media advertisements and

infavorable

not encouraging or approving or pleasing

unfavourable

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, reading books could focus on one topic without any disturbing activities. Due to the fact that most books contain one subject at the

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or

information

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relating to that topic, children could acquire the complete

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of that specific affair.

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, history publication can help student take up new knowledge about surrounding factors

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as

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

and

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an imaginary person represented in a work of fiction (play or film or story)

character

of leaders

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in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go

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social background which could lead to important decisions and events in the past.

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, children could understand the beginning and the ending of that circumstance thoroughly.

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, spending too much

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on

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can be considered to be a detrimental activity for children’s development especially their physical vision. Due to the light of

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, their eyes tend to be tired after watching

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for a long

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. While there are plenty of commercial shows which attracts their

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attention, such

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as cartoons or animated shows, they could not quit

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unless there is a strict control of how many hours they can use for watching

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. It is

scienctific

of or relating to the practice of science

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result that the over – exposed to the light of

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and computers is the most significant reason of visual impair especially for children.

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; spending more

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on reading books in proper condition has little impacts

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their health. In conclusion,

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there is no doubt that

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will be beneficial to children as a learning tool in certain ways, from my perspective books is likely to make more contribution to their education.