Genetic engineering for both medical and agricultural purposes is causing increasing amount of controversy. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of genetic engineering and explain your opinion.

There is no doubt, that the modern world is very developed, and it
is not stay
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doesn't stay
does not stay
at
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in
one place. Nowadays, people searching many ways to make our
lifes
a characteristic state or mode of living
lives
life
more easier
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easier
and more convenient.
To begin
with, the idea of growing the natural fruits and vegetables become an old fashioned one, the modern trend is to make them with
genetic engineering process
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the genetic engineering process
. The major advantage of genetic engineering is the time. It allows us to save more time for doing our own activities.
Moreover
, using genetic engineering we can choose the
color
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
, the taste and another
appearences
outward or visible aspect of a person or thing
appearance
of the product that we want to get.
By contrast
, the main disadvantage of genetic engineering consists in different diseases.
For
instance cancer
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instance, cancer
, heart diseases, hypertonic declines. The genetic engineering uses many pesticides to make the natural products more tasty and sweet. As for people, we can not differ the natural products from genetic
modifier
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modified
food that we are eating.
Nevertheless
, to know whether we
consuming
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consume
genetic engineering products, there will be a mark or a label and we can know either it genetic or normal. In conclusion, to sum up, in my
opinion I
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opinion, I
think that genetic engineering has its
prons
in favor of (an action or proposal etc.)
pros
and cons. We can eat GMO products, but not always because it can lead us to
lethality
.
Furthermore
, government should put some restriction or make strict control to produce
this
type of products in limitation.

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