Topic 2: Some British families decide not to buy televisions because they influence the development of the creativity of children. What do you think?

Majority

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The majority

of the individuals have an assumption that cycling is an effective method to reach various

destination

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destinations

. Riding

bicycle

helps people to live a healthy life

.

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.

However

, it has

drawback

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a drawback

drawbacks

the drawback

such

as time consuming. One evident benefit of pedaling is that it is used by many people as a way to keep fit.

This

is because,

majority

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the majority

prefer

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prefers

aquiring

the act of acquiring something

acquiring

a

bicycle

rather than signing up for gym classes or pay gym instructor.

Also

, it is enjoyable to ride long-distance with acquaintances and by doing so it helps burn calories.

For example

, cycling prevents life style disease

such

as hypertension and diabetes, which might be caused by obesity. As a

results

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result

of

this

, riding bike can help hinder various disorders.

On the other hand

, the obvious disadvantage of using a

bicycle

to get to different places is that it is slow and

tidious

so lacking in interest as to cause mental weariness

tedious

. Reason being, compared to other means of transport

such

as cars and motorcycle people

do not have

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does not have

to put in

alot

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a lot

of

energy but

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energy, but

in cycling individuals

use

energy to pedal and some of the

road

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roads

are

extremely in bad

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in extremely bad

extremely bad

condition that cycling can be impossible.

Moreover

, in the current

world people

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world, people

consider moving from one place to another by public

transport which

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transport, which

is readily available and faster to making

use

of

bicycle

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bicycles

the bicycle

.

For instance

, travelling for a long

distance particularly

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distance, particularly

above 100km it is preferably to

use

other means of transport to get to

desired destination

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the desired destination

a desired destination

on time. Because of

this

, cycling is considered as

an

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a

hobby but

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hobby, but

not an efficient method to

use

while moving around. In summary, many people believe that riding bikes is the most excellent way to arrive

in

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at

different destination

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different destinations

a different destination

on

contrary

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the contrary

it is slow. Cycling is beneficial to people's health by hindering

lifestyles

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lifestyle

illnesses.