Topic 2: Some British families decide not to buy televisions because they influence the development of the creativity of children. What do you think?
Majority
of the individuals have an assumption that cycling is an effective method to reach various Suggestion
The majority
destination
. Riding Suggestion
destinations
bicycle
helps people to live a healthy lifeUse synonyms
.
Accept space
.
However
, it has Linking Words
drawback
Suggestion
a drawback
drawbacks
the drawback
such
as time consuming.
One evident benefit of pedaling is that it is used by many people as a way to keep fit. Linking Words
This
is because, Linking Words
majority
Suggestion
the majority
prefer
Suggestion
prefers
aquiring
a the act of acquiring something
acquiring
bicycle
rather than signing up for gym classes or pay gym instructor. Use synonyms
Also
, it is enjoyable to ride long-distance with acquaintances and by doing so it helps burn calories. Linking Words
For example
, cycling prevents life style disease Linking Words
such
as hypertension and diabetes, which might be caused by obesity. As a Linking Words
results
of Suggestion
result
this
, riding bike can help hinder various disorders.
Linking Words
On the other hand
, the obvious disadvantage of using a Linking Words
bicycle
to get to different places is that it is slow and Use synonyms
tidious
. Reason being, compared to other means of transport so lacking in interest as to cause mental weariness
tedious
such
as cars and motorcycle people Linking Words
do not have
to put in Suggestion
does not have
alot
of Suggestion
a lot
energy but
in cycling individuals Accept comma addition
energy, but
use
energy to pedal and some of the Use synonyms
road
are Suggestion
roads
extremely in bad
condition that cycling can be impossible. Suggestion
in extremely bad
extremely bad
Moreover
, in the current Linking Words
world people
consider moving from one place to another by public Accept comma addition
world, people
transport which
is readily available and faster to making Accept comma addition
transport, which
use
of Use synonyms
Use synonyms
bicycle
. Suggestion
bicycles
the bicycle
For instance
, travelling for a long Linking Words
distance particularly
above 100km it is preferably to Accept comma addition
distance, particularly
use
other means of transport to get to Use synonyms
desired destination
on time. Because of Suggestion
the desired destination
a desired destination
this
, cycling is considered as Linking Words
an
Suggestion
a
hobby but
not an efficient method to Accept comma addition
hobby, but
use
while moving around.
In summary, many people believe that riding bikes is the most excellent way to arrive Use synonyms
in
Suggestion
at
different destination
on Suggestion
different destinations
a different destination
contrary
it is slow. Cycling is beneficial to people's health by hindering Suggestion
the contrary
lifestyles
illnesses.Suggestion
lifestyle
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