When a new town is planned, it is more important to develop public parks and sports facilities than shopping centers for people to spend their time in. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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areas, comfort
.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
,
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,
some prefer to
living
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live
be living
have lived
in
countrysids it,
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the countryside, it
the countryside it,
countryside it,
country-side it,
countrysides it,
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have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
is
important for people to find what make them feel good.
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Consequently
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,
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,
I will explain what is advantages and disadvantages
life
in
countryside
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the countryside
.
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.
On the one hand
,
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,
life
in
countryside
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the countryside
is considered healthy because some people find pleasure and
enjoyable
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enjoyment
in
this
villages
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village
.
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.
if
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If
they search for recreation and fresh air they must live in
countryside
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the countryside
. They
also
can enjoy their fresh food and vegetables.
In addition
to there is no air pollution
on
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On
the other hand
.
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.
there
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There
are many disadvantages of
life
in
this
side of the world
.
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.
they
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They
can’t enjoy the services that are
proviede
on condition, with the understanding, if; usually followed by that
provided
provide
in cities
such
as, hospitals
,
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,
schools and restaurants.
Although
,
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,
the lack of services in
countryside
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the countryside
but it’s safer than
life
in big cities that has air pollution and congestion. In conclusion
,
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,
people must do their best For the reconstruction of villages
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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