You stayed at hotel last week. After you reached home, you realized you forgot your watch at your hotel room. Write a letter to Hotel Manager, explaining what happened. Describe tha watch, say why it is important to you and ask him to help you find it.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

this

letter to inform you about my watch that

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forgot to take with me while returning to Dhaka after

three night

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stay

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at your hotel. I, along with my other colleagues chose your hotel for staying while we came to Cox's Bazar for our annual conference. I must say that

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we made a really good decision and the service we got was

truely

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truly

appreciable.

However

, when

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came back

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realized

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forgot to wear my watch from the table it was kept. You will easily be able to identify it. It is black in

color

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and the brand name

Montrex

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Montreux

can be seen on the dial. It was gifted to me by

wife

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on our

first

wedding anniversary. I hope you understand the importance of the watch to me and would be kind enough to send it back to me. please let me know the cost of the courier service. So that,

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can send you the money you will require for sending the watch. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Sincerely, Assad

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184 words

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