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Universities should allocate the same amount of money to their sport activities as they allocate to their libraries. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is often seen that universities provide
best
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the best education
education
 to their students. They
also
 focused on physical health by offering them various sports facilities. Some people argue that sports are equally important and must have
same allocation
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the same allocation
 of funds as libraries.
However
, others state that main aptitude of
education
 institution is to provide lofty
education
 and must invest handsome amount for the betterment of libraries. I agree to some extent that role of
library
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a library
the library
 is far more important than sports activities. It is very important to have
good physical
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a good physical education
education
 for students. It will not only improve their
health but
Accept comma addition
health, but
also
 helped them in developing skills
such
 as
team work
cooperative work done by a team (especially when it is effective)
teamwork
, handling pressure under tensed situations etc.
Therefore
, it is required by the universities to spend on
this
 constituent.
Furthermore
, nowadays there is too much study pressure on students. In order to relax and
reenergize
cause to be alert and energetic
energize
such
 activities should be
provides
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provided
 on regular intervals.
Library
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The library
A library
 is an essential part of every educational institution. Large numbers of students rely on libraries to complete their assignments, research works and final projects. It shows that existence of library is incomplete without having library in it.
Thus
, huge amount should be invested
on
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in
 libraries to improve its books catalogue. Latest books, journals and other reference materials should be incorporated in libraries to facilitate its users. To sum up, I would like to say that spending time in libraries is more
worthful
suggestive of youth; vigorous and fresh
youthful
hurtful
 and has lofty values than playing. Universities must upgrade their
libraries accordance with
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libraries in accordance with
 technological advancement without considering
cost
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the cost
, so that numerous benefits could be taken out.
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