ou work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months say how your work could be done while you are away ask for his/her help in arranging it

Dear Smith, I am writing to express my interest in working at our head
office
for half a year. As I have been worked in
this
company for three years, it would be great if I can gain more working experience and learn new techniques in different places.
In addition
, I can not only explore up to date skills
,
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but
also
apply the skills that I have learnt in our
office
in order to be more competitive.
Besides
, I have arranged
my
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for my
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assistant,
Ms.
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Ms
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Lee to manage my work during my stay
in
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at
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the head
office
. I have given her our client’s information and
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required for contact.
Therefore
, she will be handling most of my work in the
next
six months.
Lastly
, it would be great if I have the opportunity to work in our head
office
. I would appreciate
if
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you could help me in arranging my business trip. Thank you. Sincerely, John
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