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ou work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months say how your work could be done while you are away ask for his/her help in arranging it

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Dear Smith, I am writing to express my interest in working at our head
office
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 for half a year. As I have been worked in
this
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 company for three years, it would be great if I can gain more working experience and learn new techniques in different places.
In addition
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, I can not only explore up to date skills
,
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apply
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 but
also
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 apply the skills that I have learnt in our
office
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 in order to be more competitive.
Besides
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, I have arranged
my
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for my
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 assistant,
Ms.
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Ms
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 Lee to manage my work during my stay
in
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at
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 the head
office
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. I have given her our client’s information and
document
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the document
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 required for contact.
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, she will be handling most of my work in the
next
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 six months.
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, it would be great if I have the opportunity to work in our head
office
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. I would appreciate
if
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 you could help me in arranging my business trip. Thank you. Sincerely, John

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