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Hope
this
letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I am writing
this
letter to invite you to celebrate our traditional festival
Deepawali
with us
this
year.
While
we were studying together
last
year, you promised to visit me and believe me,
this
is the best time of the year to come to India.
Deepawali
is our national festival. It falls in the month of October or November. It literally means rows of lights. It is celebrated to commemorate the return of Lord Rama to Ayodhya after fourteen years of exile.
This
is one festival which all Indians celebrate. A month before
Deepawali
, we whitewash our homes and buy new clothes to wear on that day. On the day of
Deepawali
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we worship Goddess Lakshmi, the symbol of wealth and
also
burn crackers. There is lots of fun and frolic. Ever since I finished my course at Leeds University and came back home, I have talked so much about you to my parents that they are all very eager to see you.
Moreover
, it will help you in the project you are doing on ‘Globalisation and Tradition’. You will see that we Indians have not forgotten our traditional celebrations even if we have become a part of the global village which is influenced by
the
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western culture. We would be honoured to have you as our guest for your entire stay here. You are welcome to bring your parents along if they can spare the time. I assure you we will make it a memorable holiday for you.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • bond
  • support
  • unconditional love
  • shared values
  • mutual understanding
  • trust
  • emotional well-being
  • interdependence
  • societal norms
  • companionship
  • loyalty
  • advice
  • experiences
  • mentorship
  • trustworthy
  • reliable
  • reliable
  • cherish
  • strengthen
  • deepen
  • attach importance to
  • prioritize
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