Some people believe that children should study all subjects at school, while others think they should only study subjects they are good at or find interesting. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is argued that children should learn all the curriculum

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, whilst others believe that it is better to teach them what they are interested in. In my opinion, I think that young people should access to all

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of subjects while they can choose a particular

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in their later stage of education. On the

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, studying children all the

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would increase their depth of knowledge, and they can embark into the ocean of learning.

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, they can find out the different field of the world, which will eventually elevate their experience.

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, they can identify which subjects they like to choose as a profession due to many incorporating subjects.

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, The Guardian reported that 85%of pupils are more capable of finding out their hidden talents by studying all subjects.

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is proved that learning most of the

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may have those benefits discussed above. Opponents of

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view argued that studying all subjects are a waste of time and hurdle to becoming successful. They think that children should only learn what they like or enjoy. Because if they study subjects which have not

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to them, they will lose their concentration, even though it is an important

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. While it would not benefit them, it will be a complete

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hinder the progress of their success easily. Because if they can use

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valuable time to gather knowledge, what they like, it would be more useful for these young people. A case in point, the researcher

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found that in the USA, people became more successful

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be said that children learning their chosen subjects bring success soon. To conclude,

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learning

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belongs to positive

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to get the chance to all the subjects are interesting to the pupils of young age. I do not agree that they should be restricted to

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particular choice.