The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar graph and table
provides
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provide
the
information on the past, present and future Correct article usage
apply
population
of Japanese in the millions along with
the percentage of 65 years or over
older persons Change preposition
apply
of
Japan between the year 1950 to 2055.
It is clearly visible in Change preposition
in
bar
graph that Correct article usage
the bar
Japan
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Japan's
population
has increased since 1950 by
84.1 million to 127.8 million by 2005. From 2010 to 2015 the Change preposition
from
population
was between 127.1 to 125 respectively. Perhaps, it will going
to Change the verb form
go
be going
be decrease
Change the verb form
be decreased
be decreasing
in
between 2035 to 2055 with 110 to 89.9 respectively.
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apply
On the other hand
, it is clearly noticed in the table that percentage of 65 years or over
older Japanese have increased in 1950 Change preposition
apply
with
4.9% and it will continue to grow up to 41 % by 2055.
Change preposition
to
Finally
, this
bar graph and table revealed that Japan
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Japan's
population
was at highest
in the year 2005. Probably, it will go to decrease in future. Correct pronoun usage
its highest
However
, the percentage of 65 years or over
older Japanese will Change preposition
apply
going
to be increased by 2055.Change the verb form
go
be going
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words population with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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