The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph and table illustrate the
population
trend
in Japan
over a period of 105 Yrs. Between 1950 and 2055. The population
index in
millions.
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is in
Overall
, it can be clearly seen from the graph that population
of Correct article usage
the population
Japan
initially
experiences an upward trend
till about half of the period and then
it reflects a down
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downtrend
trend
. And from the table
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,table
it is clear that
the percentages of old
age Correct article usage
the old
population
growth
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grew
year
by year
.
In 1950, the total population
of Japan
was about 84 million
and, after then
its population
grown
up Add the auxiliary verb
grew
has grown
year
by year
and at the end
of 2005, its total population
was 128 million
which was approximately one and half times the total population
of 1950. After 2005, its population
started to decline rapidly, in 2055, nearly 87 million
was its total population
, which is approximately the totally
of 1950.
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total
However
, the percentage of the over age
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over-age
population
followed an upward trend
over the whole period. Initially
, in 1950, its total population
was about 4 million
which is about 5 percent
of the total Change the spelling
per cent
population
of Japan
. At the end
of 2055, its population
increased by approximately 33 million
which is 41% of the total population
of Japan
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