The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone call in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002. Summarise the information by selecting a reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates the combined
the
time spend in Correct article usage
apply
billions
of Use synonyms
minutes
, Use synonyms
of
three Change preposition
on
difference
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different
kind
of Fix the agreement mistake
kinds
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phone
phones
calls in the United Kingdom from 1995 to 2002.
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,phones
Overall
, local calls were the most popular over the whole period, with national and international calls and Linking Words
mobiles
calls in Fix the agreement mistake
mobile
second
and Linking Words
third
respectively. Linking Words
However
, national and international calls and mobiles both increased over the period; with mobile Linking Words
minutes
increasing significantly, Use synonyms
thus
, narrowing the gap between the three categories in 2002.
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spend Use synonyms
in
local Change preposition
on
call
fluctuated over the time period, with just over 70 Fix the agreement mistake
calls
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billions
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billion
minutes
in 1995, peaking at approximately 90 Use synonyms
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billions
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billion
minutes
in 1999 and Use synonyms
then
steadily decreasing Linking Words
just
over 70 billion Change preposition
by just
minutes
in 2002.
National and international calls increased gradually year on year, from just under 40 Use synonyms
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billions
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billion
minutes
in 1995 Use synonyms
and
to Correct word choice
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peak
of just over 60 Add an article
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billions
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billion
minutes
in 2002. Use synonyms
Mobiles
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Mobile
calls
increased rapidly Change the verb form
call
with
around 5 Change preposition
from
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billions
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billion
minutes
in 1995 to around 45 Use synonyms
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billions
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billion
minutes
in 2002. Mobile Use synonyms
phones
usage doubled from approximately 20 Change the noun form
phone
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billions
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billion
minutes
in 2000 to 40 Use synonyms
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billions
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billion
minutes
in 2002.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 3 times.
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