The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone call in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002. Summarise the information by selecting a reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates the combined
the
time spend in Correct article usage
apply
billions
of minutes
, of
three Change preposition
on
difference
Replace the word
different
kind
of Fix the agreement mistake
kinds
Change the noun form
phone
phones
calls in the United Kingdom from 1995 to 2002.
Add the comma(s)
,phones
Overall
, local calls were the most popular over the whole period, with national and international calls and mobiles
calls in Fix the agreement mistake
mobile
second
and third
respectively. However
, national and international calls and mobiles both increased over the period; with mobile minutes
increasing significantly, thus
, narrowing the gap between the three categories in 2002.
Minutes
spend in
local Change preposition
on
call
fluctuated over the time period, with just over 70 Fix the agreement mistake
calls
billions
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billion
minutes
in 1995, peaking at approximately 90 billions
Change to singular
billion
minutes
in 1999 and then
steadily decreasing just
over 70 billion Change preposition
by just
minutes
in 2002.
National and international calls increased gradually year on year, from just under 40 billions
Change to singular
billion
minutes
in 1995 and
to Correct word choice
apply
peak
of just over 60 Add an article
the peak
a peak
billions
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billion
minutes
in 2002. Mobiles
Change the noun form
Mobile
calls
increased rapidly Change the verb form
call
with
around 5 Change preposition
from
billions
Change to singular
billion
minutes
in 1995 to around 45 billions
Change to singular
billion
minutes
in 2002. Mobile phones
usage doubled from approximately 20 Change the noun form
phone
billions
Change to singular
billion
minutes
in 2000 to 40 billions
Correct your spelling
billion
minutes
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Vocabulary: Replace the words billions, minutes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 3 times.
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