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Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, it creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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In these days,
world
Suggestion
the world
 is a global village and people can travel easily everywhere in the world without any difficulties. Various countries have different culture and
traditions but
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traditions, but
 mostly natives do not force the tourist to follow their rituals and customs. As we know that different region people behave according to their areas, so we cannot strongly say that international tourism does not create any stress among natives and
foreigner
. Mostly tourists travel different regions:
therefore
, they can explore the uniqueness of other areas. Their clothing, living and food are different from
foreigner
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foreigners
a foreigner
, as
regionals
the extended spatial location of something
regions
 are living their lives according to their environment:
on the other hand
, it is hard for other people`s country to accept them because they are living their lives according to their circumstances.
This
 conflict can make stress between two
nationals but
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nationals, but
 we should always remember the basic morals of
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
 and respect the other nations. Tourist or
foreigner
 should not be
judgmental
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judged
 according to their own values. On the side of
picture
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the picture
,
this
 situation can create the creativity and friendly
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
 among all the human beings in
this
 universe. As we know when someone come
in
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into
 our area, one brings his own thinking and values with oneself, which innovate the old
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
 and make our life easier.
This
promote
Suggestion
promotes
 the unity and compassionate
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
 among people. To sum up all the arguments, we can say that international tourism does not create tension if natives and
foreigner
mange
be successful; achieve a goal
manage
 it properly with good moral values. In
fact it
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fact, it
 enhances the bonding among people .
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