The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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in Canada

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over the period of 16 years from 1992 to 2007.

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of female

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in Canada

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immensely high compared to male

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throughout the given span of years. Regarding the year 1992, female

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were on the hike

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nearly 99,000.

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males were in a steep decrease of nearly 71,000.

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, both female

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had an increase in number in the year between 1994 and 1996 (approx. 1, 05,000 and 75,000 respectively).

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both female and male

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had a fall in the number.

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, by the end of the period 2006 female and male

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had a steady increase

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. 1, 48,000 and 98,000 respectively. To summarize, the numbers

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were higher than male

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of universities in Canada for the year 1992 to 2007.