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You are looking for a part-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter: - introduce yourself - explain what sort of job you would like - say what experience and skills you have.

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I am Anna pursuing my master’s degree in the field of microbiology at St. Johns University, Richmond road, Bangalore and writing to you to check opportunities for a part-time job. As one of my main scopes is assessing microorganisms using
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, I would like to obtain a part-time job as a lab assistant in any of the hospitals surrounding the same area to widen my learning and gain
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 experience with the assay methods and analysis. I am well versed and experienced in handling different types of microscopes, proper sterilization methods of
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equipment
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, preparation and culturing of different species and strains of microorganisms and have mastered the technique of Gram’s staining for identification of positive and negative strains of bacteria. I am fluent in English, Kannada and Hindi and can communicate well, have a good knowledge of completing and maintain reports and
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 MS office and
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 in using excel to maintain the generated data. I hereby request you to review my attached CV as well for
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 information and let me know of any available job openings. Awaiting your kind response. Thank you in advance.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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