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The table displays trends concerning the amounts of fast food consumed in Melbourne. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The table gives us the information about the various fast food that are being served in Melbourne, namely hamburger, Fried Chicken, Salad, Fried Rice, Noodles and
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 the quantity of their intake in 2005,present an
d
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,
in 2025. The unit of consumption is made as “units”. Fast foods are being the most common diet to the rece
nt
Suggestion
for
 generations the quantity of consumption is more. The overall view of the table depicts that almost Hamburger and Fried Chicken have equal weightage i
n people
(statistics) a coefficient assigned to elements of a frequency distribution in order to represent their relative importance
weighting
diet wherea
s Fried Rice
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diet, whereas
 and Noodles are the least preferred ones. All the other items other than Hamburger have an increasing trend accor
ding to the dis
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trend, according
play. Fried Chicken, Fried Rice and Noodles have linear
ly increasing over the y
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have linearly increased
ears but t
he choice
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years, but
 of Salad has exponentially increasing digits. Choice of Hamburger by consumers is being a bit unpredictable. Almost Salad has increased its number double through years.
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lly a
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the years
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Finally, all
ily prepared food items have great demand since its consumption is increasing over years.
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the years
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