The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The map illustrates some proposed

paln

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plan

plans

for

central

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the central

a central

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area of Islip

town

Overall

,The main changes to the

town

will be a ring

road

around the

centre

.Various other developments will be

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apply

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houses and shops. Looking at the map as it is now,we can see that

main

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the main

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road

runs through it is

centre

from west to

eadt

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east

add

eat

.The

second

map shows the planned

padestrian

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pedestrian

road

.Traffic will be diverted

on to

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onto

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a dual

carriage way

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carriageway

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that will form a ring around the

town

centre

. Currently,there is a row of shops along either

sides

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side

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of the main

road

.The north side of

area

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the area

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planned

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is planned

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for

bus

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the bus

a bus

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station,shopping

centre

,car park and new housing.The south side shops remain

same

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the same

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.The

town

park

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park's

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size

reduce

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reduces

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and build more housing plans into a ring

road

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