Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace.Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake,regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer. What,in your opinion,should be the main function of university?

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There are two main ideas about
function
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the function
of universities among people.
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think
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thinks
that
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universities have to create courses for teaching skills and knowledge to
students which
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students, which
will be useful for their future work.
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the contrary,
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contrary, the second
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group of people
think
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thinks
that
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,
essential function of university
is prepare
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prepares
students comprehensive.Actually
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the difference is similar to divergency between
monoprofessionalism
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and diversification.Today
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community
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the community
not only need abilities which can be used in the workplace
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but
also
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need
comprehensivity
in an all-inclusive manner
comprehensively
in
international arena
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the international arena
.
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essay
respond questions
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responds to questions
responds questions
like "why people have to train
themself
reflexive form of "them"
themselves
for the workplace" and "why students have to be comprehensive".
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students
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who trained themselves one-sided have problems in their family or friend
community
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they only know about their profession and they haven'
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got any information about other subjects
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so
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answering any question which is aside will be difficult for them.
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kind of people usually can'
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express
themself
reflexive form of "them"
themselves
in
community
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In addition
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there are many schools which propose
monospesificational
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classes for younger people.I
beileve
accept as true; take to be true
believe
believed
that
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it will affect worse to
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next generation
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the next generation
. Obviously
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the true aspect
for
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of
this
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issue is providing
accessbility
the quality of being at hand when needed
accessibility
to knowledge for
students' sake
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the students' sake
.Comprehensive people have the key for train younger generations
truely
in accordance with truth or fact or reality
truly
.They don'
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have to hide themselves in
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community
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the community
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therefore
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they haven'
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got any complex about
this
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issue. Overall
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I have to admit that
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being comprehensive is pretty cool
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even its effect for the world economy is worse than
monospesification
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.In my opinion
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diversification is better variant than modifying people to robots.Maybe we can stimulate economy later
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but we it is too difficult
to return back our
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to return back to our
community
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  • Lifelong learning
  • Holistic development
  • Vocational training
  • Industry-specific competencies
  • Critical thinking
  • Creative problem-solving
  • Academic research
  • Intellectual development
  • Ethics and values
  • Societal contribution
  • Job market demands
  • Practical training
  • Internships
  • Knowledge advancement
  • Global challenges
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