The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend.

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health care is one of the concerns of their parents and society. Due to the change of people’s diet and lifestyle in

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the past few decades

, increased percentage of obese children is a serious concern. Regarding

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essay will discuss about their diet and lifestyle as its causes and effects on their life. Since the rapid grow of fast-food restaurants, children and their parents are easy to get access to those restaurants.

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, those restaurants provide high calorie food

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as fried potatoes, hamburgers, and juice, which contain large amount of sugars. Those are nutritiously imbalanced food and it is not suitable to provide for children. If children eat those

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foods

frequently, they might get extra calories, which is far higher than the required calories for them.

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may lead them to overweight for their age group. Another reason of the increasing

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of obese children in western society is rooted in their lifestyles. The unprecedented improvement of technology and various

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of TV games, children are likely to play inside rather than go outside to play soccer or baseball. It is clear that the

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of children, who are allowed to use

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devices

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as computers, iPads and smartphone, has been increased in past decades. Because of

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, smaller

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of children play outside of their house. Those

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cause serious effects on children’s life. As the example of

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, they may be buried by other children at school.

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, they might refuse to go to school and lose their self-confidence. Co-occurred health problem would be another problem. Because of the

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, they may not be able to do enough exercise which are expected for their age groups.

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, those obese children cannot train their muscles and

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strengthen their

bones. To conclude, increased

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of overweight children in western countries should take seriously in the world. With regards of those causes and effects, people should consider their children’s diet and lifestyles.