Alternative energy sources that use the natural power of the wind, waves and sun are too expensive and complicated to replace the coal, oil and gas that we use to power our cities and transport. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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It is difficult and costly to replace the coal
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oil
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and gas our cities and
transport
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rather than Alternative
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uses. In my point of view I
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opinion. To commence with the reason
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and foremost sometimes it may very difficult to wait for the natural
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.Nowadays people's are more busy with their jobs.So that they cannot wait for the natural
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power
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, Natural
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sometimes we may not get if natural disasters occur.
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result, we
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must depend
on the coal
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and gas. Adding
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more point is Natural
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power
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is supplied from the
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nature, but
it's may not available when we need indeed. For an example
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needs
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that time natural
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may not get
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owner and passenger may face difficulties.
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and gas industry stored
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energy
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power
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They always supply
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when it's needed.
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energy
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power
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alternative natural gas industry stored is less than the previous one.
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coal
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coal, oil
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and gas supply is more popular than alternative
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taken
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power
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It is available in everywhere. To recapitulate
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transport but
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transport, but
it is quite difficult to replace the coal
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and gas by the alternative natural
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power
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