The bar graph below shows the percentage growth in average property prices in three different countries between 2007 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar graph below shows the percentage growth in average property prices in three

different countries between 2007 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make

comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the average rate
increase
in
property
cost
in three various countries, namely
Algeria
,
China
, and Argentina, from 2007 until 2010.
Overall
, the most noticeable trend in the average growth
increase
on
property
cost
is that
Algeria
fell dramatically over time,
while
China
consistently increased year by year until the end. Argentina fluctuated throughout the given period. The average
property
rate of
Algeria
started just above 6% in 2007 was the highest figure among the three nations, upon which it dropped to 4.5% a year after and
then
continued to decline to just over 3.5% in 2009 at which it ended
to
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3% in 2010, almost twice below than the percentage rate of
china
. In 2007,
China
's average
property
cost
was almost three times lower than
Algeria
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at 2%
in
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2007 but consistently
increase
in the subsequent years, reaching almost 6.5% in 2010, surpassing
Algeria
's number in 2007,
while
Argentina's average
cost
increase
fluctuated to just under 5% and just above 1% throughout the given period from 2007 until 2010.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words increase, property, cost, algeria, china with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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