28. These days many families move to other countries for work. Some people believe that the children in these families benefit from this move. However, others believe that it makes life more difficult for the children. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is a common fact that more people are migrating to rich countries in order to seek for a better living
environment
for their children. Some people support that these decisions will benefit their children; while, others believe that new living environments will bring drawbacks for their children. The essay will discuss the both views and presents my support to the former view. 
To begin
with, moving to a rich nation will provide a high quality of life for children.
Moreover
, harmonious communities, better educational resources, clean living
environment
with close-zero pollution, and universal health care system there will benefit in children's growth. 
For example
, Chinese immigrants in Canada provide a safer
environment
for their children to grow well there. At least, in the current moment, their children are living in a society without being threatened by corona viruses. Their children have much happier lives in schools without facing extremely heavy study tasks as those in China.
On the other hand
, some people believe that relocating to an unfamiliar nation will bring negative impacts on the young newcomers. They will encounter with culture shocks, language barriers, different climates, lack of peers and social life etc.
In addition
, an unfamiliar living
environment
also
will have a detrimental impact on their cognitive capacity.
Finally
, they may suffer from psychological issues,
such
as depression or anxiety, due to inadequate supports from their communities or their parents who are
also
facing the similar conditions as well. In conclusion, I personally opine that emigrating to developed countries will benefit the younger generation due to a better living
environment
.
However
, relocation will
also
create challenges to t
he
Suggestion
for
m due to above reasons.
Therefore
, in order to prevent the drawbacks, parents should invo
lve their children to mak
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involve their children
e the decision and start to prepare ahead together by learning a new language, a novel culture , a
d
Accept space
,
ifferent climate etc
bef
continuing in the same way
etc.
ore their movement.
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