At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

There are many different social activities and sport classes at universities and colleges that are very important for students’ development and their mental health. Personally, I believe that sports and social activities are extremely beneficial and should get similar financial support. I feel

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way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.

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of all, as many research

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shows, sports

like yoga and dancing might reduce stress

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levels in the body and improve sleep.

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very important for students suffering during exams and having anxiety. My personal experience is a compelling example of

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. Ten years ago, when I was studying at University, I have had a really hard

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. I have slept only four or five hours during the night and I was forced to study all day long.

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, due to the stress I lost my appetite and I lost

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to communicate with my friends.

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, I have decided to

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in dance classes suggested by one of my classmates. After only one week I felt very calm and balanced.

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, I was able to sleep at nights, my memory improved and I excelled in class.

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all, I was very happy feeling no more need to take my antidepressant drugs. I have been very successful in my class, and I owe it all to that dance class.

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, sports and social activities help students to create new connections, and these can lead to future opportunities. When we regularly converse with our peers, we get to know their personalities.

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, when my sister was in

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college, she

subscribed for tennis classes. Before that time, she was very shy around the strangers and it was a big issue for her to have a new friend. In fact, two months later, she came out from her shell and we noticed a huge difference in her

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manner of acting or controlling yourself

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. In conclusion, I am of the opinion that these classes should definitely receive financial support as they are way too important for creating a healthy and happy community.

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is because social activities affect positive to

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the students’ state

of mind, and because they help to make a new relationship and encourage students to become more communicative.