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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your opinion

#people #situation #job #shortage #money #situations
As the world is growing
day
 by
day
, it is the personal view about the present condition through which anyone is going. Some individuals
are in the believe
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believe in the
are in the believe
 that not satisfying job profile or the less the money they have, should be acceptable to them. While others think that these conditions should improve. I intend to discuss both of these arguments. While, in my opinion, these kind of situations are changeable.
To begin
 with, Situations are created by personnel. If, anyone is sincere towards his targets or his dream
goals
Accept comma addition
goals, then
then
 that individual not only
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
 their desire needs but
also
 can make his future
secure
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secured
.
For instance
, some person believe and do so much hard-work by changing their jobs so frequently so that after considerable amount of
time
, they can get all the needs of their interest in
matter
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a matter
matters
the matter
 of money or job position.
In addition
, some players like
virat
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Virat
kohli
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Kohli
 did so much struggle in their childhood that in today’s
time
, he is world famous. It is possible due to his approach of not compromising to accept the defeat in his life that he had faced so many times.
Furthermore
, some engineering or medical professionals get the starting job in
call centre
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a call centre
. But,
that is
 only for their initial financial support. They treat these jobs as their current need
fulfillment
a feeling of satisfaction at having achieved your desires
fulfilment
 package or get some professional exposure.
Also
, The tendency to be in a specific
jobs
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job
 throughout in
lifetime
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a lifetime
 is changing
day
 by
day
 as everyone wants to excel in his life and they
wants
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want
 to create and grab new opportunities to support and
rise
raise the level or amount of something
raise
 their families well.
However
, There are only
few people
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a few people
 and that are in some secured jobs like in government agencies who do not change with
time
 and only accept the nominal salary as they believe it is justifiable.
Also
, they satisfied with their low salaries by compromising with the
time
 and situation they are facing. To sum up, It is always advisable for
every one
all people
everyone
 that they should think about their present conditions and should always be progressive towards his career progression and exploring new ways to overcome the financial problems they are facing.
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
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