You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

#job #course #teachers #situation #time #action

Dear Mr John, I am writing

this

to express my concern regarding the course. I have enrolled

for

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Accounting

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the Accounting

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course

during

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evening

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the evening

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, but now I am not able to attend the classes regularly. I am working in a reputed company as

Accounts

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an Accounts

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officer. But, now the company has decided to change the work timings as per the client requirement. I was worked in

morning

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shift, which was from 7 am to 4

, but as per the new rule, the shift time will be from 9 am to 7

As a result

, I am unable to attend the evening classes held between 4

to 6

. As my family is in need of financial support, I cannot leave my job as of now.

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masters

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degree is essential for future opportunities, so I would like to request

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extension of evening class time. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Davis

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You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

please describe th eprocess of manufacture of bricks?

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The illustration show how chocolate is produced. Task 1

The government should spend money in promoting sport and art in school, rather than sponsoring sports and art events in communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The sports center that you regularly visit has a problem with some of its equipment. Write a letter to the center manager. In your letter •tell them about the problem; •describe how it has affected you; •explain why it should be fixed soon.