You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

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Dear Mr John, I am writing

this

to express my concern regarding the course. I have enrolled

for

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Accounting

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the Accounting

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course

during

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evening

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the evening

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, but now I am not able to attend the classes regularly. I am working in a reputed company as

Accounts

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an Accounts

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officer. But, now the company has decided to change the work timings as per the client requirement. I was worked in

morning

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the morning

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shift, which was from 7 am to 4

, but as per the new rule, the shift time will be from 9 am to 7

As a result

, I am unable to attend the evening classes held between 4

to 6

. As my family is in need of financial support, I cannot leave my job as of now.

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masters

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degree is essential for future opportunities, so I would like to request

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extension of evening class time. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Davis

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